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Post by sam on Jan 27, 2015 2:53:16 GMT -8
Hopefully if I've done this right there should be an attachment on here.... I'm crap with computers. I mentioned that my character name came from a character I created for a book So far I've almost completed 3 with a fourth in the planning stages. Only 2 people have read the first one (my Mum and Dad!) and I figured that it was time (after many edits!) to get some more feedback.... so I thought where can I get some unbiased opinions...?  Don't feel that you have to be nice or kind...I need to know if it is any good at all...The attachment should contain the prologue and the first 3 chapters...If not then heaven knows what's going to end up on here.....Thanks. Attachments:Inheritance.docx (64.82 KB)
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Post by sam on Jan 27, 2015 2:54:21 GMT -8
Attachment did not load.... got some work to do...
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Post by zepp on Jan 27, 2015 3:02:28 GMT -8
Sam, the attachment worked fine. I am editting a textbook tonight, but will give it a look if I have some time.
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Post by Cristan Jast on Jan 27, 2015 3:36:42 GMT -8
Hmmm. It didn't load on my page  And I was wondering why you've been so quiet the last little while. Now I know. Congrats Sam |
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Post by zepp on Jan 27, 2015 4:36:09 GMT -8
Just click on the inheritence.docx link at the beginning of her message. Should work fine.
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Post by Cristan Jast on Jan 27, 2015 5:23:11 GMT -8
Ahhhhh gotcha. I didn't see anything that looked like a link but once I moused over? There it was. Thanks Z. Once I lose my power and internet in this bloody storm I'll have something to read |
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Post by zepp on Jan 27, 2015 9:02:19 GMT -8
I am still working through it, will send my suggestions after I finish it.
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Post by zepp on Apr 26, 2015 3:02:35 GMT -8
I'm just finishing reading through it. I put away my marking pen and decided to just enjoy it. It is engaging and the characters seem to be very real.
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Post by sam on Apr 26, 2015 12:39:41 GMT -8
thanks Z
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Don't feel that you have to be nice or kind...I need to know if it is any good at all...The attachment should contain the prologue and the first 3 chapters...If not then heaven knows what's going to end up on here.....Thanks.
